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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
vision, id say is rather good, i love pieces like this, that seem to point up to the heavens or galaxies and beyond. its like a beacon, showing you the path!
however, i also realise that this type of setting or background is used in many pieces that people do because of the feel to it (or at least id like to think so) so i cant give as much originality due to that.
the way you did the clouds here is quite lovely as well, BUT there are a few places that seem somewhat rushed. 99.9% of the left side is really perfect, however the right side is where i see some work needing to be done. the second layer of cloud, over the very bottom, has some pretty obvious strokes and ares that arent very well blended in, which throws it off a bit for me. also the very top part on the right side, has random white that looks like it bled from the top upwards which also doesnt seem to fit the way this was done, these are my reasons behind technique and impact.
i do really like this though, i like the blues you used and how you blended those, and you really know how to make some nice clouds! the stars are also done well, there arent too many in this small space of darkness that you would be able to see them, its just enough to finish off where you are looking in a way that would make one smile!
if you have anything to say, let me know! i wish to be as fair as i can, without hurting feelings and i know each piece has time and effort put into it! (this is also my first crit so i might be doing something wrong
again, all in all i really like this!
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